Ielts academic Writing Task 2


IELTS Writing Task 2: answer all parts of the question



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IELTS Writing Task 2: answer all parts of the question
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A student sent me the following question: 
The role of prisons should be to punish criminals who have committed serious 
crimes. Training courses and education offered to prisoners are a waste of 
taxpayer's money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The student who sent me this question noticed that it contains two sub-topics: 
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Should the role of prisons be to punish serious criminals, not petty criminals (less 
serious criminals)? 
2.
Are training courses and education a waste of money? 
Apparently there is a model essay for this question which only addresses the second 
sub-topic. I think that would be a mistake; you should try to answer all parts of the 
question. 
In this case, the two sub-topics help you because they tell you what you should write 
about in your two main body paragraphs. Always study the question carefully, and 
make sure you know exactly what it is asking you to do! 
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IELTS Writing Task 2: no surprises!
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The examiners' band descriptor sheet states that a band 7 essay 
"presents a clear 
position throughout the response"

A "clear position" means that your opinion must be clear (if the question asks for it), 
and "throughout the response" means from the beginning to the end of your essay. 
For this reason, it's a bad idea to save your opinion for the conclusion. We don't like 
'surprise conclusions' in English academic writing. Instead, you should state your 
position in the introduction, support it in your main paragraphs, and repeat or 
summarise it in the conclusion. 
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IELTS Writing Task 2: introduction and conclusion
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In 
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last week's lesson
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, I explained why you shouldn't save your opinion for a 'surprise 
conclusion'. Look at the following introduction and conclusion for an essay about 
whether it is better for students to work alone or in a group: 
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Introduction
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People have different views about the most effective way for students to work. While 
there are some advantages to studying alone, I personally believe that group work is 
usually more productive. 


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Conclusion
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In conclusion, both individual and group study can be useful under different 
circumstances, but I generally prefer to work with others as part of a team. 
Notice that my 'position' is clear in the introduction, so the conclusion simply repeats 
my view in a different way. 
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