I nte r nati o nal e n g LI s h lan g uag e testi n g syste m

collective strategy for the 21st century.

Although it is possible to share both a cause and its resulting effect in a single sup-

porting paragraph, this should be done with care as such a structure is more com-

plicated and could possibly lead the candidate to grammatical or lexical inaccuracy. 

Here is a reworded version of the above essay to demonstrate how to include both a 

cause and its effect in the same supporting paragraph. Notice the comparative lan-

guage that helps explain to the reader which solution is considered best: