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classroom teachers will remain weak.

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In this essay, evidence and discussion are given for both sides of the argument.  It 

should be noted, however, that the writer does not fully disclose their personal posi-

tion on the subject until the statement of position sentence at very end of the essay.  

This is done to preserve the objective nature of the essay style and is a quality that 

should be present in all discussion essays.

Try it yourself!

Try writing a discussion essay in response to this essay question:

Some believe museums should entertain people, while others believe their 

purpose is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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