I nte r nati o nal e n g LI s h lan g uag e testi n g syste m

disadvantages of a home-based job are numerous.

To conclude, despite advantages of lower overhead and independence, working from 

home has many more drawbacks than favourable points.  It is thus hoped that pro-

fessionals everywhere think carefully before settling on this working arrangement.

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As the above essay illustrates, there are occasions when advantage/disadvantage 

essay questions must be responded to in more of an argument than discussion es-

say structure.  Note the manner in which a thesis is used.  Also note the instances of 

concession that are shared (but not thoroughly discussed) in the essay, which can be 

a balancing factor in the advantage/disadvantage essay style.

This is a solid and thorough response to the task description.

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