Ielts-7-Writing

6.50 MUSEUMS
What are the purposes of places such as museums and galleries, and how
should they be funded?
INTRODUCTION
Museums, historical sites, classical art and music, and so on have no
financial benefits in our society. In this essay, I will focus on the importance
of roots and the dangers of technology. (33 words)
BODY
It is in museums and at historical sites that we are reminded of our history.
History is the way in which we keep in contact with our roots, which in turn
provides us with a sense of belonging. Then life and the future become more
meaningful. For example, when people know the history of their country and
nation, they have a better understanding of their present situation. They
understand that they are part of something that is much greater than
themselves.
Modern technology is rapidly replacing the things that were important to our
societies in the past. Traditions and customs are disappearing at an alarming
rate. That is to say, crafts and art forms are being practiced by fewer and
fewer people.
To maintain museums and the like requires money. Governments should make
it one of their priorities to provide the funds for the maintenance of existing
places and for developing new ones. For instance, research into the past
should be going on. In this way, more information about our history can be
gathered and shared with the public. (179 words)
CONCLUSION
Aspects such as our background, the effect of modern technology, and the
funding of museums have been dealt with in this essay. This leads us to

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conclude that some of the taxpayers’ money should be used for this worthy
cause. (40 words) (Total words: 252)
ALTERNATIVE PARAGRAPH
Members of the younger generation are becoming less interested in and
enthusiastic about celebrating the traditional festivals of their cultures. They
are influenced by Western cultures and are becoming more interested in
Western festivals like Christmas, Halloween, and Valentine’s Day. When
young people are taken to places like museums, it will help to instill in them
a pride for what is theirs.

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