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Paragraph 4
The next time  
(1)
Pip feels separate and ashamed of
Joe occurs when the blacksmith accompanies Pip to
Satis House so that Miss Havisham can reward Pip
with twenty-five guineas. 
(2)
Miss Havisham’s
imperious ways tie Joe’s tongue into knots so that he
is scarcely able to make any sense when he speaks. He
also has trouble with his hat, a problem that will be
echoed when he visits Pip in the London apartment
he shares with Herbert Pocket. Pip feels guilt about
how ashamed he is about Joe’s lack of sophistication,
but he cannot control his feelings. He has by now
fallen in love with the cold and snobbish Estella,
who with her mocking eyes disdains Joe’s
awkwardness and simplicity. 
(3)
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