part as inputs to obtain maps for 2010 to
2015. Finally, the resulting maps along with
input maps regarding climatic and political
characteristics were inserted into our model in
order to predict future patterns.
The OV is a little misleading. The colon in the first sentence gives the reader the
impression that the author is going to mention all three stages together within the
same sentence. The second two stages are not clearly marked. The RV separates the
OV’s first sentence into two parts. In the RV, first the author announces that there
are three stages. Then she talks about these three stages in three separate sentences,
which begin with a number indicator. This also makes the paragraph visually easier
to follow.
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