Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

Level 5

Assessment Commentary:

AF1: 

Ideas & Voice

 – Write imaginative, interesting, and thoughtful texts

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The author includes three points that go beyond personal reasons. All of his/her ideas are relevant and creatively 

linked to the topic, which is that children should not be allowed to watch scary movies. The arguments provided 

include: children will suffer from sleepless nights, the movies don’t promote independence, and they have a poor 

influence on behaviour. The author also elaborates on each reason with sufficient detail.

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The author’s individuality and unique voice are evident throughout the text. The text is lively, expressive, and  

engages the reader with great effectiveness (e.g., “Come on people, get real…”). The author includes questions 

in the opening, short sentences for effect (e.g., “Why?” and “Yours and yours alone”), and writes to the audience 

in a witty tone that helps to showcase his/her personality. The overall tone reflects the writer’s passion for the 

topic and it is easy to see his/her sense of enthusiasm.