Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

AF4: 

Organisation 

– Construct paragraphs and use cohesion within and between paragraphs

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The author uses linking words and longer linking phrases to introduce new reasons or sections of the text.   

(e.g., “One reason why we should have P.E. every day…,” “Another reason why you should increase P.E. time...,”  

“And the last reason why you should make all classrooms ...”). 

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The author is beginning to use signal words within paragraphs (e.g., “For example…”) to introduce supporting 

details such as facts and examples. 

•  The author has not yet developed well-structured paragraphs. He/she should work on organizing his/her writing 

into paragraphs for each reason presented. 

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Despite the general lack of complete paragraphs, there is evidence of some key paragraphing elements,  

including: linking phrases, topic sentences, and supporting details.