Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

Level 3b

Assessment Commentary:

AF1: 

Ideas & Voice

 – Write imaginative, interesting, and thoughtful texts

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The author includes three reasons that go beyond personal reasons and are of a broader, more socially  

relevant perspective. All the ideas are relevant and linked to the topic of persuading the principal to allow daily 

P.E. class (e.g., lose weight, get faster, play more sports) and the student attempts to elaborate on each of the 

reasons; however, supporting details do not always directly relate to the reason. 

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The author’s individuality and unique voice are evident in some sections throughout the text. The use of clever 

words and phrases, like onomatopoeias as short sentences, help to portray his/her individuality. The overall 

tone shows that the author cares about the topic and that there is a sense of enthusiasm behind the text.