Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

       AF2: 

Organisation

 – Produce texts which are appropriate to task, reader, and purpose

•  The author’s tone is lively and amusing throughout the text and is reflective of a conversation, which is 

 

appropriate for a personal recount. He/she interjects animated and exaggerated phrases at particular points for 

effect. The author is aware of the audience as he/she aims to entertain with details and personal feelings. 

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The title directly states the event and is predictable. Alluding to the main idea or lesson learned in a creative way, 

instead of directly stating the event, will help to improve this text.