Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

AF4: 

Organisation 

– Construct paragraphs and use cohesion within and between paragraphs

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The author uses a combination of simple, generic linking words and simple linking phrases to show the passing 

of time and to attempt to connect events (e.g., “eventually,” “next,” “then,” “later that day,” “after that,” and “at the 

end”). The author is beginning to use some original and longer linking phrases (e.g., “when we got there”).  

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The author attempts to use indented paragraphs and is beginning to show an understanding of when to change  

paragraphs; however, paragraph changes are inconsistent and could be grouped more effectively.   

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