Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

Level 4a

Assessment Commentary:

AF1: 

Ideas & Voice

 – Write imaginative, interesting, and thoughtful texts

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The author includes three points that go beyond personal reasons, and all of his/her ideas are relevant and 

work to persuade the principal to bring computers into the classroom (e.g., children are bored listening to the 

teacher, students will learn in an easier way, students will want to come to school). The author also elaborates 

on each reason with supporting details.

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The author’s individuality and unique voice are evident throughout the majority of the text. The writing is lively,  

expressive, and engaging. The overall tone shows that the writer committed to the topic and there is a sense 

of enthusiasm.