Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

Level 3c

Assessment Commentary:

AF1: 

Ideas & Voice

 – Write imaginative, interesting, and thoughtful texts

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The author includes three reasons that go beyond personal reasons and are of a broader, more socially  

relevant perspective. The student attempts to support the reasons with further explanation and detail, although 

he/she does not always express his/her ideas with clarity.  

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The author’s individuality and unique voice are evident in sections throughout the text. The overall tone of  

enthusiasm shows that the writer cares about the topic and the potential outcome. Hints of personality are 

shown through phrases like, “Just say the magic word.”