50 Successful Ivy League Application Essays

Don’t Compromise Your Message
“This seems petty, but don’t be afraid to swear or use verbally controversial 
words, as long as they serve a legit purpose. Many of my friends applying to 

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Chapter 22: Advice on Writing from Ivy League Students
college this year believe that an unnatural level of censorship is required for 
their essays. never compromise your message to appear more clean-shaven.”
—Anthony Gouw, Duke University
Tell a Story
“I know they always say not to write about tragic events or make ‘sob 
stories’ because everyone does it and the admissions readers won’t pity you. 
However, I feel that you should write about an experience that is unique to 
you (for me, this was my first time ever performing on stage in a musical 
instead of playing in the pit orchestra or working as stage crew). Also, tell a 
story! If you enjoyed your experience and were inspired by it, chances are 
your writing will reflect that emotional aspect and reveal something new and 
intriguing to you. The admissions officer will learn a lot about you, too!”
—Jean Gan, Duke University