22 Templates for ielts writing: Fast Track to Success in the ielts writing Test

Despite this, an apparent
problem with this opinion is
without understanding its culture, a lot of language points do not
make sense because sometimes learning the culture is the pre-requisite of mastering the
language. 
Consequently, we should not overlook
the importance of learning its culture.
For my part, after considering the arguments above, I feel that
learning both language
and culture is the best way in this aspect.

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Essay Template 12
Argument: 
Today, more and more parents depend on their children’s grandparents for
childcare. Do you think this is a positive or negative trend?
At present,
an increasing number of parents rely on their children’s grandparents for
childcare. 
In my view,
this is a negative trend.
It is obvious that
depending on children’s grandparents for childcare bring about a host of
issues. 
First and most importantly,
the relationship between parents and children is the most
important relationship in the family. 
Indisputably,
the love between parents and children is the
only unconditional love on the planet; therefore, if parents do not spend enough time with their
children, it is harmful for children’s wellbeing and development. 
Another problem is
grandparents are generally older, which means they probably do not have enough energy to
look after very young children very well. 
It is true that
childcare is an exhausting job which
does not really suit senior citizens. 
In addition,
it is unfair for grandparents to take care of their
children’s children because elderly people have the right to enjoy life. 
It is obvious that
childcare is probably more than a full-time job which requires a lot of effort and time