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Method :
2 sentences
-introducing the topic
- Give a general answer
(30-40 words)
Totally enough for high band score since you cannot get a high band score only by introduction ( main body paragraphs are more important that’s way you show your ability and answer the question)
Four types of question:
1 Discussion
2 Opinion
3 Problem and solution (cause/problem/solution)
4 Two-part question

1 discussion


1.1 Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups , while others believe that it is better for them to study alone . Discuss both views and give your own opinion .
Plan : Topic- study in groups or alone
Answer – sometimes better alone , usually better in a group
People have different views about the effectiveness of group study as opposed to working alone . While there are some benefits to studying independently , I believe that group work is usually more productive .

Nowadays it is controversial topic that whether studying alone is more good or in a group . In my opinion I would totally agree with the former opinion and discuss both views in the following body paragraphs .

It is argued that is studying alone better than studying in a group . even though both of them has their own good sides , I would definitely go for studying alone .

1.2 Outweigh advantages and disadvantages .


Today , it is common to see famous sports people advertising sports products .Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages ?
(in this kind of essay we should discuss both views and give our opinion through the body paragraphs or in conclusion )

2 opinion (Agree/disagree questions)


2.1 Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

2.2 Today more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children . Do you think this is a positive or negative development ? (it is not advantages or disadvantages ) you can use the same structures as agree or disagree essay


3 Problem and solution . (cause/problem/solution)
Many criminals reoffend after they have been punished . Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished , and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem ?
Plan : topic – criminals reoffend
Answer – several reasons , a variety of measures ( government , communities)

Setting in a prison for a long time is not the way to stop criminals from doing the crimes again , and they are doing after prisoning time . I believe not being stricter in a prison is not real cause and we need to do more things done to stop it ,

It is true punishments do not always deter criminals from committing more crimes . There are various reasons why offenders repeatedly break the law , but governments could certainly take steps to address this issue .

In my opinion people do not have a good life after going out of prison , to have one they do more crimes repeatedly . I believe there some ways to stop them from making crimes .

The gap between the rich and poor is growing . What difficulties does this cause?
How can these problems be overcome ?

4
Two – part questions


Many people have problems managing their money. What skills does a person need to manage their money? Who should teach children these skills ?

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work , job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being . what factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers ?


Plan : Topic – job satisfaction
Answer – several factors , unrealistic/impossible ( to have full of satisfaction)
Summary for introduction :

(5 Best way questions)


Some people say the biggest problem we are facing in the world is growing the number of population . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
In body 1 .try to explain why they think like that
In body 2 . explain why you think it is wrong

2 sentences in 5 minutes


(topic + Answer )
Nowadays because of working hours are a lot , we have to spend most of our lives at work . there are a lot of reasons how to get job satisfaction . it is not true to expect to have full of energy and satisfaction at work .

It is commonly being true according to some statistics that we spend rest of their life in a job that we don’t like . I believe thare are anormous number of factors to be enjoying in at work .

Work plays a central role in our lives, and we would all like to feel fulfilled professionally . While a variety of factors may lead to job satisfaction , it would be unrealistic to expect everyone to be happy at work .

4 paragraph essay



  • Main body paragraphs

  • 5 sentences in each

  • 90 to 100 words each

How to write main body paragraph


2 Types main body paragraphs
1 : Firstly , secondly , finally ( when we have more than one idea and it is perfect for
Advantages , disadvantages , problems and solutions )

2 :Idea , Explain , example ( when you have one idea , reason and opinion )

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

3-minutes plan



  • Disagree for several reasons

  • School timetable is full , no time for community servise

  • Students’ work in other subjects would be affected

  • Teenagers might not want to do it ( reluctant , no motivation)3

Body one .


(Topic sentence)There are several reasons why I would argue against having compulsory community service for secondary school students .(giving your first opinion ) firstly , the school curriculum is already full with important academic subjects , such as maths , science and languages .(supportive idea : you can use your own experience ) For example , I remember having an extremely busy timetable when I was at high school , and I would not have been possible to add to it .Secondly , students’ performance in other subjects would be affected if valuable study time were taken by charity work or neighbourhood improvement schemes . Finally , I believe that teenage students would be reluctant to take part in programme of obligatory work , and this could lead to poor motivation and even bad behavior .

Summary


Try to write 5 sentences
1 Topic sentence 2 firstly ( explain more , or add example ) 3 secondly 4 Finally
Remember;
Linking words do not help your ‘ vocabulary ’score
Firstly , secondly , finally , for example , furthermore, moreover, first and foremost .
Examiners want to see ‘topic vocabulary’
Compulsory community service , academic subjects, school curriculum , extremely busy timetable , students’ performance , valuable study time , obligatory work , poor motivation .

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?


-voluntary (not compulsory ) community service is positive
- students more motivated I they can choose
- gain work experience , self confidence , skills
-good for CVs , career, university admissions , employers.

(Topic sentence )On the other hand , the opportunity to do voluntary community service could be extremely positive for high school students. By making these programmes optional , schools would ensure that only motivated students took part . These young people would gain valuable experience in an adult working environment , which could help to build their self confidence and skills on their CVs could greatly improve school leavers’ career prospects. For instance , a period of voluntary work experience might impress a university admissions officer or a future employer .

Try to write 5 sentences
Idea
Explain ( 2 or 3 sentences )
Example ( can be changeable with explain )
Linking words don’t help you
On the other hand , these young people , such experience and skills , for instance
Topic vocabulary
Opportunity, voluntary community service , programmes optional , ensure that only motivated students took part , adult working environment , build their self confidence , enhance their skills .
Conclusion
2 easy ‘rules’
Never write anything new
One sentence : repeat , summarise (if your opinion is asked give it through the paragraphs )

Conclusion technique


Paraphrase the answer that you gave in your introduction

Now we are going to look through how to write conclusion for all types of essay


1 discussion+(opinion)
2 opinion
3 problem and solution
4 Two-part question

In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to crime , but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom .


Do benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks ?

Introduction


It is true that video surveillance has become commonplace in many cities in recent years. While I understand that critics may see this as an invasion of privacy , I believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks .

Conclusion


In conclusion , I would argue that the advantages of using video security in public do outweigh the disadvantages .

Opinion


Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.

To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Introduction .
Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not need to contribute to state schools through taxes . Personally , I completely disagree with this view .

Conclusion .

In conclusion , I do not believe that any financial concessions should be made who choose private education .

Problem and solution


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