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169 IELTS Essay Samples 1395-1-16-22-07

This a very good essay, you have made your arguments well and set the 
paragraphs out as required. However, take care with your use of definitive 
statements e.g. Without cigarettes, these people would have no jobs. Maybe they 
would gain employment in another industry, we cannot be sure. Over all, well done! 


 
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91. Should the same laws which prohibit the sale and consumption of heroin be 
applied to tobacco?
 


 
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Recently, a hostile debate arouse when a few well reputable health organizations 
suggested the application of a similar act of heroin selling and usage prohibition _. In this 
assay, I will analyse why the adoption of such a law could be a breakthrough in our 
youngsters safety, according to my vision. 
Firstly , tobacco does not differ much from heroin when it comes to the later addictive 
effect. Nicotin , the active ingredient in tobacco, exerts its effect by acting directly on 
smoker’s brain cells. Numerous experiments carried out by scientist on animals, specailly 
rats, proved that this toxic chemical does lead by time to dependency, just similar to the 
effect experienced with herion. 
Secondly, restriction on cigerattes selling will surely show an instant decline in tobacco 
smoking. ” Having an easy access to cigarettes puts a tremendous pressure, specially on 
teenagers,to resist such a temptation” Dr.Hisham , head of Pschycology department at 
Alexandria Medical college , states firmly. “Giving the new generation the sense that the 
severity of smoking is equivilant to other lethal drugs usage woulod be a life saving 
step,they will thank us for() as they get older.” he continues. 
To recapitulate, applying of a futuristic law as the suggested one will definetly have a 
positive impact ,not only on young people’s health but on our society as a whole. 

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